Wednesday, September 2, 2009

A Baseball Haiku

Haiku are my way of getting a post in- writing something- when I am too tired to write more. A cop out? Maybe.

Old men play baseball
injuries and surgeries
can't stop the boys of summer.


***I slept on this, and realized, in bed, that this is not a haiku at all. I guess I was tired!
Here's a haiku:

The love of the game keeps them
coming back for more
despite the rheumatism.

*******third try: I see that I still don't have it right.

achy and old joints
squeaking around the basepath
grinning like schoolbys



there. I got it.

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